You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
- explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months.
- say how work could be done while you are away.
- ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Mr. Natraj,
I am writing to seek a temporary internal job transfer to the headquarter office based in Malaysia.
As you probably know, I am pursuing an online master degree in Information Technology at a Malaysian University, so to fulfil the course requirements, I must physically attend the final semester at their Malaysian center to do the graduation project.
Although I will be quite busy doing the final year project, I will be going to the office after the college time and I will leave the work place after completing all tasks. Moreover, if there is a need for a meeting with my local colleges, I can have it done remotely via Skype.
I hope the above proposition would be acceptable. Additionally, I would you need your approval for the same so that I can put the request forward to the human resource department for this interim shift.
I am looking to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Ahmad Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Natraj, I am writing to seek a temporary ...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ek a temporary internal job transfer to the headquarter office based in Malaysia. As you ...
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Line 21, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am looking to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ahmad Khan
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ahmad Khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93788819876 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82095636942 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.189447954 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164809952101 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619713658547 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351744518316 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744189803687 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035511526425 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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