Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Every person on the planet is different from others in some context. it is not like women are not suited for many tasks. we may also argue that even some of the men are also not good in a particular task when compare to women. The men and women should not be differentiated because of their inherent physical differences. but it is true that society thinks that many of the tasks are not equally suited.
For example, when it comes to presenting the luxury items, women are always preferred over men, especially, in the case of jewelry. Here we can not brand the jewelry with the image of the men, simply because men do not wear jewelry. so it is very obvious that we need the face of the women for marketing jewelry.
There are also cases where women can not take responsibility like men. For example, when we talk about the army, only mens are considered. it is believed that women can not fight in the war. it would be too risky for her and the nation. so it is advised that the army is for men only especially it comes to the war. but, then also some of the women are engagging in many activities
To sum up, men and women are not equally suited for many tasks. The above example clearly shows the differences of tasks carried by men and women. However, there are many tasks, that task can be carried by men and women both. it would be better to build a society where men and women get equal opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, even so, for example, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41287878788 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31322504331 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2532771659 60.3974514979 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5294117647 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500250465894 0.243740707755 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165081272868 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13495171603 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31182292004 0.150359130593 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121098620454 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 14.1392134831 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.1639044944 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.