Working from home some think as beneficial. Some people think t may distract the family routine. What is your opinion? BY JAGJIT
Family commitments along with fulfillments of financial responsibilities have paramount importance in one’s life. Some consider that working from home advantageous; but, others are think that it may disturb daily functioning of a family. In my opinion, I think that it provides flexibility; but, it has some shot-comings-absence of regular pay and fringe benefits as well.
On the one hand, it imparts a wide range of facilities/options; time relaxibility -which can play a pivotal role in the success of a self employed personnel; Own boss- this powers to work on own directions without following a boss’s guidelines that is a become daunting task on daily basis, and as per preferences- which stands that one can work according to his liking and disliking irrespective of any kind of work compulsion. England, take for example, intending to issue guideline in this context as it is helpful to combat some social menace: depression, alienation, isolation, and favoritism.
On the other hand, it has some detrimental impacts on human life such lack of fixed monthly emolument which is regarded a backbone of a family otherwise it disturb the social life of personal owing to unable pay monthly school fee and bills. Consequently, strong bounding in a pair started to change and convert in a dispute. In addition to it, for searching a job as per needs involves intensive legwork which becomes a boredom sometime that leads to physical damages as well in the shape of disease. A Japanese study show that freelance job and working from home, people are more short temper than that of regular employees.
In conclusion, it is admittedly that independent home work culture can bring chances of personal and social development; however, others and I think it has a limited domain to grow rather than regular employment due to financial obstacles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...from home advantageous; but, others are think that it may disturb daily functioning o...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egular pay and fringe benefits as well. On the one hand, it imparts a wide range...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disturbs'?
Suggestion: disturbs
...ded a backbone of a family otherwise it disturb the social life of personal owing to un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21262458472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18992243256 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4151958977 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.9 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232828831021 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902963651931 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904275336396 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139228755425 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908281096757 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.