Agree or disagree: the way people dress is a good indication of their personality.
Modern society allows many different ways of self-expression, amongst which is a person’s dressing style. Many people believe that dressing style is one of the most reliable ways to understand one’s personality. Personally, I think whether we can tell a person’s character depends on the specific situation considered.
On the one hand, if one has a choice over what he or she wears, dressing style can reveal his or her personality. Unsurprisingly, people dress according to their preference, or choose the style that makes them the most comfortable. For instance, people who are naturally energetic and athletic, such as my brother, usually refer casual and sports-like clothes. As he is always running around or playing balls, he chooses sports jackets that do not restrict him and allow him to move freely.
However, it should not be forgotten that, in many cases, our dressing styles are determined by rules or specific occasions. If we all dress alike, our dressing style cannot show our personalities. For example, many schools nowadays require students to wear uniforms which are usually suit-like, or sweater-like clothes. Each school chooses a style that shows the characteristics of the school, rather than their students, which means that we see little of students’ individuality. 丨Likewise, when we work in offices, we must wear business suits which are usually dark-colored and formal clothes. These clothes are designed to give a sense of seriousness and efficiency, whatever our real personalities are like. These cases show that, sometimes, our dressing style only reflect the requirements of the occasions, and not our personality.
In conclusion, it is true that our personalities influence how we choose our clothes. In these cases, one’s dressing style shows his or her personality. However, there are situations where we cannot decide what to wear. In these cases, dressing styles reflect rules of society or requirements of the occasion, not one’s personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Modern society allows many different ways of self-expression, amongst which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48881789137 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18481479038 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4881766948 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163220669007 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061857231449 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631091682089 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115939759631 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306562126468 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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