A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
-give contact details for when you are away
-give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties
Dear Rora,
I hope you and your family are all well, and thank you for agreeing to house-sit during my vacation. If the WiFi is available, you can reach me through my mobile. If not, you can call the Hilton hotel reception: 64797892999.
As to my dog, Tina, goes out for at least 30 minutes to pee and poop as she is trained. As long as the weather is cloudy, there is an indoor dog part called Waggle Park. Plus, since her vet said she was fed up with too much than others, she has been on a diet so feed her twice a day only.
One more thing you need to keep in mind is that recently our neighbor’s car was stolen. The policeofficer suggested me to clean up the mail box unless robbers assume that no one is in my house.
I’ll see you as soon as I arrive.
Best wishes,
Myoungju.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36363636364 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37290355404 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8564900817 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126727154543 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457058538381 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648620753836 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739464351752 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069728359446 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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