The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate the changes of the road to city hospital and the car park between 2007 and 2010.
It is immediately clear that the road to city hospital had changed significantly from 2007 to 2010. Specifically, the appearance of roundabouts and the movement of car park.
To begin with City road and Hospital road, crossroads of City street with Hospital street were demolished and replaced by roundabout. Besides, the junction linked Hospital street with Ring street was knocked down to make way for new roundabout.
On the other hand, the bus stops located on both sides of Hospital road were destroyed and relocated to the West of Hospital road. Moreover, the bus station was connected with two roundabouts. Also, the car park of staff and public was separated. Specifically, public car park was moved to the East of the city hospital while staff car park remained unchanged.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03378378378 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73697026087 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1434233673 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317813792382 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144937714801 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1371934301 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240403717423 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100582120681 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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