Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
Dear Mary,
I am writing this letter as a response to a letter that I have received from you earlier today. I would like explain in detail why our home was noisier than usual in the last couple of days.
The main reason for the noise is that we had guests in our home for the past 3 days . They have all come to attend my sister’s wedding that happened yesterday. Most out of town guests were accommodated in the hotel where reception was held. We made arrangements in our home for close relatives only. But we did not think that the place would get too noisy.
I am really sorry for the inconvenience we have caused for the last two days. Most of the relatives who stayed in our home left yesterday and the remaining guest will be leaving by tonight. I am really sorry about once again and we will make sure that it won’t happen again. We will try to keep it down even if we have guests in our home. Thank you for being a kind neighbour and giving us a letter instead of calling the police on us. Awaiting your response.
Your Friend,
Bala.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mary, I am writing this letter as a response t...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d guests in our home for the past 3 days . They have all come to attend my sister&...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...s wedding that happened yesterday. Most out of town guests were accommodated in the hotel w...
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Line 11, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ven if we have guests in our home. Thank you for being a kind neighbour and givin...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting your response. Your Friend, Bala.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41206030151 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30919899532 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7784752123 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7142857143 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204239477659 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752704666398 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071442157476 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122709828889 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400640492197 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.