You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the furniture in your apartment that my family have been renting for over the last two years. Most furniture is in the satisfactory state, but I believe that the following items need either repairing or replacing.
Firstly, the model of the TV set is outdated. It seems to have been designed in the late nineties. My brother, who is a sales assistant, informed that the manufacturer stopped producing this model of television in 1998, when we tried to purchase the replacement for the old remote control. We, therefore, still use the old one, despite its malfunction.
Secondly, the sofa is in poor condition. I think that it is the high time to substitute it with a fresh one, since there are numerous holes in the surface. They are constantly growing in both number and size. My wife has attempted to fix the damage, but it does not help, as the material appears irreparably worn out.
In conclusion, I would be grateful, if you do something about the TV set and sofa as the landlord, because my family is experiencing discomfort. My neighbors say that renting such an apartment does correspond to the standard of living in London. I look forward to your reply with solution.
Your sincerely,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92694063927 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88123873797 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.902558112 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0714285714 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155263777832 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492173276783 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655709207385 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822387648359 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749657117271 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.