Some People are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this good or bad thing? Discuss
your opinion.
There is no doubt that technology has taken over the complete population in world having significant
impact on people ways of life. People tend to travel with the pace of technology to keep them updated
and engage themselves with current job in technology, in my opinion I share both good and bad thing
views about people who are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops.
To learn and know about technology one must know what devices should be used and how it must be
used. Hence buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops will keep them updated and now that technology is
developed by various vendors and so as each one comes up with new ideas. By doing this people will
learn the built of technology and improvise themselves by doing so can place themselves in reputed
multinational companies and few can start their own startups.
Also considering that it will make them addicted to it and end up spending unnecessary at the end of
day for no good reason which is bad thing. Considering that with technology alone one cannot run the
show and built up the career. Now that companies keep releasing new version of gadgets, phones, or
laptops every three to six months with minor changes and increasing the price which makes no good
deed in buying them. Also becoming fond of these will keep you engage always due to which one cannot
indulge himself in physical activities in turn will make them weak. In recent era each and everything is
built on the online platform like shopping, movie streaming, outdoor games people will not have
tendency to go out and spend time with families and friends.
To sum up with, its clear that technology has taken over us, but it should be used wisely, and people
should be aware is it necessary to buy technology-based products knowing the which is good and bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84542586751 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47226452281 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.863613337 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258334372581 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952513197601 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106099545349 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811000688106 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101755183358 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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