Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, conventional newspapers are becoming increasingly reliable source helping the public update news effectively. A portion of people argues that this phenomenon is the most suitable method for individuals to gain news; however, the rest of people consider that other media such as online news would be more effective. Personally judging, those tendencies possess advantages and disadvantages in some extent, and the latter statement would bring more benefits in the whole of the circumstance.
On the one hand, analyzing the first point of view, the news printed in newspapers has been researched carefully before providing the audience accurate and sufficient information. In detail, when publishing officially an article to the public, the content of the article has to be verified by the professional journalists in advance. A standout example of this would be China Post’s years long investigation into fake baby milk in China. They carefully interviewed victims and investigated the procedures of producing milk in some original factories. After that, they published the stories on the topic for some months, which provided the detailed analysis of the causes and thoughtful suggestions of solution.
On the other hand, considering the latter statement, other media such as online platforms would bring more benefits to public related to the convenient and quick spreading. In detail, the vast majority of people get their news from Facebook and other social media websites, which aggregate articles from various online publishers. This helps them save a great deal of time and catch the hot-trend easily. For example, some news including sexual abuse or violence in schools quickly appeared in online platforms helps the communities pay attention to protection for their families and reduce the dangerous level of extreme consequences.
In conclusion, newspapers almost provide exact information with detailed investigations in the long period bringing the audience valuable content, while the online media would help the readers update news quickly by convenient ways. Also, the online platforms would be more prevalent later in life if they control the accuracy of the products.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59940652819 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8977563971 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3771609369 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.785714286 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194275969713 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650289603483 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563079199269 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121962602456 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464987211079 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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