Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that involving in team games in the childhood is essential for the future career. While other people argue that it is not necessary. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
On one side of the argument are those who believe that taking part in a team sport plays a significant role in the future work.
Supporters of the idea may appeal that team play helps youngsters to develop crucial skills such as confidence, respect, communication and cooperation skills, sense of support, perseverance as well as learning a teamwork. All these skills are necessary for building a successful career because a person as a rule will work in a company where everyone has to take a part in completion of one goal or a project. To be successful in a career mutual respect and cooperation is very important and a child may learn these soft skills participating in a team sport.
However, there are those who believe that all these skills the youngsters can gain doing other different activities and there is no need to be involved in a team sport. For instance, self-esteem and confidence as well as perseverance a young person may be developed from doing any individual sport, while other skills as cooperation and communication should be developed in the school. Additionally, knowledge of a particular subjects is more important for a future work, thus schoolchildren should be focused on study rather than playing team games.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however I think that team sport is not important for a future work because to be professional a person need to gain solid knowledge of its subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ood is essential for the future career. While other people argue that it is not neces...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
...elieve that taking part in a team sport plays a significant role in the future work. ...
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Line 15, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to gain solid knowledge of its subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93079584775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9195090347 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1434996673 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259080351335 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104314721843 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043841404184 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154296946246 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656500746274 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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