The impact of presence machines
Nowadays, it is true many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. In this essay, i totally agree that is gives more possitive impact the negative.
The possitive of this issue is facilitate load of work, it is because many things being done by machines for now. For example, previously anything the work in the home we must do it self, like launder clothes today it can be done by machines. As result, with existance the machines our time is economize.
In the other hand, the disadvantage of this issue is make a disease like lazy and conscientious, it is because we accustomed do that with simple ways. For example, because we accustomed do that with washing machines and when the washing machines is broken or was a blackout we will wait for the washing machines can be used back or we will go to laundry store. As result, human no longer idenpedently and lazy for develop creativity.
It is important to economize our time so we can do different work twice or more work in the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
...ative. The possitive of this issue is facilitate load of work, it is because many things...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...nything the work in the home we must do it self, like launder clothes today it can be d...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'economized'.
Suggestion: economized
...with existance the machines our time is economize. In the other hand, the disadvantage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49735449735 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56633938005 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7554054051 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120608331663 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512371433483 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587221096541 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063940927793 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393402134582 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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