Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is incredibly one of the marvelous instruments to humankind that generates a unique rhythm and turns the surrounding environment into a peace. On the one hand, it is difficult to comprehend the various music categories for an ordinary people, in my opinion, music has been certainly a primary key to breach the gaps between not only the different cultures and the traditions but also between the youth and aged people.
To begin with, music can be seen in every region representing their cultures, values, and traditions and it can also be seen in every corner of the world and nowadays, youth has started to take interest to learn the different music systems. For example, the youngsters in Unites States have an interest in Indian music and the renowned musicians from India usually arrange the concerts and classes to teach Indian music in United States. This would surely not only amalgamate the different eastern and western cultures but also build a stronger and sustaining relationship between the two countries.
In addition, there is no gender and age gap to learn and perform any kind of music, meaning anyone of any age can enjoy music of their interest. Music would truly make everyone to dance on its rhythm and tune. For example, in one of the classical Indian music systems, everyone including the teenager to old people perform the dance steps together. In this way, it will develop meaningful communication between any ages of people.
In conclusion, music has the inherent ability to develop communication between different cultures and consequently building a strong relationship by giving one single platform to youngsters and adults.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13970588235 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74900697705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2711008414 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199230343486 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078410145114 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320112016219 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116409912067 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328925295349 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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