Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. DISCUSS both views and give your opinion.
People have different vies concerning the most drastic environmental issues that the world suffers from nowadays. Although there is some truth in claiming that the endangered plant and animal life should not be underestimated, I am inclined to believe that vast numbers of other problems are of greater significance in the meantime.
On the one hand, any decrease in the numbers of plant or wildlife would directly affect our finely balanced ecosystem. The sharp decrease in Pandas, which have been recorded as endangered animals since 1999, has contributed to the omnipresence of Cholera disease in China. The reason is that Panda feeds on bamboo trees; therefore, the absence of Panda caused the bamboo trees to grow in massive numbers. Hence, this up normal growth represented a perfect media for mosquitoes; the host of Cholera parasite. Thus, if one or more organism in our ecosystem became extinct, severe consequences will follow.
On the other hand, I would side with those who suppose that there are much more considerable environmental issues that should be focused on. For instance, global warming is putting the lives of thousands of people, plants, and animals on stack every year. Owing to the fact that its the driving force behind tens of natural disasters, such as tsunamis and hurricanes; therefore, it causes the death of an uncountable number of living organisms yearly. Furthermore, such disasters have contributed to departing thousands of families from their homes; moreover, they burden the economies of targeted countries with billions of dollars. None of these disasters would have occurred without the influence of global warming.
To conclude, despite the drastic effects of the extinction of some plants and wildlife specious, I hold the notion that people should pay superior attention to other issues that may cost them lives and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28859060403 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7460184886 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0377569201 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113682153898 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362110379191 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408248718493 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742662634016 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358535319565 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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