The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields,is by instilling in them a since of cooperation, not competition.
I do not agree with the statement that teaching the youth only cooperation and not instilling in them a sense of competition is the best way to prepare them for their future jobs. While cooperation undoubtedly is one of the most important quality every young needs to have, without a sense of competition they will become complacent and productivity would be qualified.
Competition, I think plays a prime role in maximizing productivity in any sphere. In my school, after every examination, the name of the top three students of each rade was put on the main bulletin board of the school. Seeing one's name on the board was a matter of great pride and respect and everyone wanted to see their name on the board. It was this sense of competition that motivated the students to perform better and thus increasing each student's productivity.
Consider an example of a ruling party in a government. Had the other parties also be in cooperation with the ruling party, the ruling party would not take any pain in doing work for the people and would do nothing to make the life of the citizens better. Such a system will lead to torpor and inefficient government and would eventually fail. On the contrary, it is the sense of competition in the ruling party to do better than the previous government to retain power which pressurizes it to work hard for the citizens and maintain a productive and efficient government.
Thus we see no matter how small or large a system, competition plays a role of utmost importance. However, an excess of this competition may also lead to imbalance and people should also cooperate with others to maintain harmony.
Thus we see that though cooperation plays a vital role in maintaining a peaceful environment, a sense of competition is also necessary to maintain productivity and efficiency in any system. Therefore, in my view, the young should be instilled a proper balance of cooperation and competition, as an excess of anyone may lead to an inefficient system.
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- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 33
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify them later are bad decision makers 33
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields,is by instilling in them a since of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...oductive and efficient government. Thus we see no matter how small or large a s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, i think, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90615835777 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9276733624 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478005865103 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3382742516 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132248911335 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045667235977 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061739930896 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729586354293 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548625728827 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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