Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Biologically men and women are designed differently and to complement each other . there are certain areas where men have a dominance and others where the women enjoy a superiority . so keeping in mind these different sets of expertise we can say that there are certain tasks for which men and women are differently suited .
men are generally physically stronger than women . so, in the tasks which requires a great deal of physical effort it is natural to prefer men as they can perform with more efficacy . Consider some physically intensive tasks like construction workers working on a construction site and carrying around heavy containers of cement and bricks or fire fighters carrying around heavy gas cylinders. such work can be carried out be men with more ease and efficiency that is the reason we see that most of the construction site workers and firefighters are men. While some people might argue that there are women who are stronger than many men , such women form a very small proportion of the total women population .
similarly,there are also various tasks where women are preferred . For example a majority of the kindergarten teachers are women as women are generally more loving and caring toward children .
so keeping in mind the differences between men and women i would agree with the statement that there are various tasks for which men and women are not equally suited .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05603448276 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71854664624 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6656914094 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282579452595 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124446000382 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717111758863 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189453583668 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524021355083 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.