You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words
Dear Zaunab,
Hello ! I hope you're fine. As you know my life has been quit hectic recently, as I have moved in to another apartment.
For sure, you remember my old accommodation, it was not only pretty old and misery, but also far away from my workplace. And at the last times I needed to pay a lot on repairing. So I started searching for a new place, and luckily I found the current one.
Let me tell you about it, its location is in the heart of the city, and the building design is just a state-of-the-art model and environment-friendly. There is also a pool, can you imagine how much fun it is ! Moreover, the apartment is a duplex house, and the infrastructure is perfect so I don't need to pay a lot on repairing like the other one. Although its cost is quit expensive than the previous one, its almost on the back street of my job's address so I'll be able to save the transportation money.
I can't wait tell you visit me ! What about next weekend? we can have amazing movie night with my delicious pizza that you prefer, and in the next morning we can start our day with breakfast at the pool's terrace then go on a ride around the city.
can't wait to hear from you soon, and I'm excited for your visit.
Love,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
... and the infrastructure is perfect so I dont need to pay a lot on repairing like the...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n the back street of my jobs address so Ill be able to save the transportation mone...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o save the transportation money. I cant wait tell you visit me ! What about nex...
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Suggestion: Cant
...then go on a ride around the city. cant wait to hear from you soon, and Im exci...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4224137931 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70684460134 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.463917525773 1509% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2675504721 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146895939826 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552968895172 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386215363369 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865811196662 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295419203557 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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