Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
innovations help humanity to cope with everyday issues and discover future. To my opinion it can bear all problems existing on the planet.
The easiest but not the least important example that technology gives an opportunity to connect people all around the world. Instant connections with different people may impact greatly on society's problems. Internet creating new job positions every minute. Today you can work on your laptope at home while your employer is in another country. Business became more flexible and mobile what gives every person to find the best place to work, the best product to buy or the best service to choose.
Also innovations helps to cope problems never possible to fight or avert before. For example, modern devices can determine where is high risk of huragane or earthquacke and prevent millions people harm.
Therefore uncontroled access to information and high level of science development have their disadvantages. The most important thing of our time is data. The one who owns data can rule the world. Sometimes it uses against the humanity: terrorism, contraband, etc.
Summing up, I believe that technology and science help to solve all of the society's problems. When we use it it in right directions it can cope the human diseases, avert catastrophes and create the oportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to buy or the best service to choose. Also innovations helps to cope problems neve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21028037383 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71874283114 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672897196262 0.4932671777 136% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1186974877 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122440177766 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378736469697 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536310031306 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563868161275 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455837078174 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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