With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago. What problems do this cause for society and the family?
New generation lives in a totally different era as compared to half century ago due to advancement of technology. Plausible issues of this cause are less interaction between family members and poor social life.
The rudimentary problem that occurs because of modern technology is that mere significance is given to physical conversation. To be more precise, children prefer to spend their leisure time on social media applications such as., Facebook, whats app and many more instead of talking with their parents. However, 50 years ago, people did not have luxury of the internet and they were more inclined towards kith and kin gatherings which assist them to build a strong kinship. As a result, families are become nuclear and smaller, whereas in the past, humans were living in a large family.
The another crisis happens in people's social life is that human beings have isolated themselves from rest of the world. Everyone is busy with their own technological gizmo and people do not have time to spend with their community or friends. Therefore, due to this vogue, in society, dis-satisfaction in social life is proliferating at an alarming pace. Youngsters want to live their life on their own without respecting relationship which is the fundamental element of any society. Consequently, degradation of social life is happening though it is not an affirmative ramification.
To recapitulate, although there are manifold issues are occurring in the society as compared to previous time due to invention of latest technology, positive outcomes in terms of having luxurious life cannot be neglected. Furthermore, it is recommended that parents should guide their children to avoid excess usage of modern advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37226277372 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98931845546 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4230554362 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181996732352 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551700988724 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329136312796 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101398189148 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478847391409 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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