You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
- explain why you took the job
- describe the problems that you experienced
- suggest what could be done about them
Dear sir
I am writing this letter regarding some disputes that I faced for a few days until I joined your company as a part-time employee.
I am doing study in Masters of nursing, so for the maintenance of funds I started work in your hospital and assigned as a staff nurse. Timing of my duty is 9 am to 1 pm.
Unfortunately, my colleagues could not be friendly with me and if I asked about anything related to policies and procedures they just ignored my questions. Moreover, there are also some problems regarding hygiene because other members not throw the garbage according to colour coding, which can be hazardous for the sanitary team to dispose of fatal litter.
I kindly request you to take action against this reckless activities to maintain hygienic environment in hospital and to lessen the infection-prone diseases. It will be generous support if you help me out to introduce me with other workers.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir I am writing this letter regarding some ...
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...rse. Timing of my duty is 9 am to 1 pm. Unfortunately, my colleagues could not b...
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...nitary team to dispose of fatal litter. I kindly request you to take action agai...
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...out to introduce me with other workers. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94047619048 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8466822396 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702380952381 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.767385217 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174571280632 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644944287825 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360331551801 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915258775965 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349635786575 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.