You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about some important papers that I might have left in your “The Meridian” hotel while I was staying there for a conference meeting. I humbly request that once you will discover the official records, please inform me about the same
To embark on, I booked a room number 624 in your hotel from 22nd September to 23rd September for a conference meeting organized by my company Mckinsey. It was held in the Business hall on 23rd September. After participating in the conference, I checked out from the hotel on 24th September. The next day i.e. 25th September when I reached my company, I realized that I had left some critical documents in the hotel room, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They were placed in a blue folder printed with the name Prabhpreet Kaur on the top.
Above all, those official papers are very critical as they contain confidential and sensitive financial data, hard copy of the presentation and some notes that I registered during the conference. They are as much as important to the company as they are to me and If they are misplaced the company will suffer huge losses and it will also impact my career.
I humbly request, if you could check the room I stayed in thoroughly and once you will discover the documents keep them in your possession safely. Kindly inform me by giving a call at 7844546125. I will personally collect those documents from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...records, please inform me about the same To embark on, I booked a room number 624...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77611940299 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65256257525 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7290019439 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316960453247 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976037816828 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744314572943 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168282034358 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695754479871 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.