Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
In this present scenario, traffic and pollution problems have become headache. Therefor, some say that rise in petrol price is most effective to handle with this problem. To some extent i agree with notion because other factors are also be important to solve this problem, such as implementaing strict rules and making new roads.
On the one hand, there are an ample number of reasons that how traffic and pollution can be reduce if increase price of petrol. Firstly, nowadays , everyone has more than two vehicles at home which they use for go to one to another place , short distance too. If enhance the petrol price, they would prefer public transport and bicycle for short-distance. As a result traffic would be reduce to some extent. Secondly, if petrol will be costly, there will fear in everyone's mind. For example, people will not buy petrol if petrol will be 1 litter in 130 indian rupees .
On the other hand , strict rule regulation also lead to solve traffic and enviroment related problem. For example ,odd and even rule which people cannot drive their car everyday on road and this rule is being followed in Delhi and 35% level of pollution decreased in there years. Moreover, by making new roads would reduce the traffic problem.what i mean to say is that , traffic is increasing day to day but number of lanes still remain same . That lanes could not handle that traffic.
In conclusion, except grown price of petrol to decline vehicles and save to enviroment , strict rule regulation should be implement and number of lanes would be constructed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92830188679 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49037941274 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6722486955 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191176902101 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741244119522 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411039058246 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112789509487 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392899069978 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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