In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
How to progress on specific problems is of great importance. The statement suggests that progressing in any situation requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view. While it is true that debating can help us to make progress in some way, the argument is too absolute and requires more consideration.
Admittedly, confronted with opposing opinions, it is more likely that we get a better and deeper understanding of our own opinions. it is through the process of being questioned and argue back compellingly that we can hold a firmer belief of our opinions, discover potential flaws and improve the current solution more targetedly. For example, countries can advance their relationships through the consensus achieved by debating with originally opposing points of view. Researchers can improve their knowledge and broaden their horizons when they are in an academic debate and thus more likely to reach the final truth.
that being said, it must be pointed out that discussing with people who have contrasting points of view has risks and may lead to contradictory consequences. In other words, those who are not tenacious may fail to persist their original goals through the discussion with people who are against them and forgo their otherwise successful plans. our society abounds with such examples, one of which is the partner of Steve jobs, Ron Wayne. he created Apple with jobs, but others' criticism and questions impeded him to continue on his original dream. instead, he dropped out halfway, and now he still leads an impecunious life. Although we cannot blame Ron for his decision, but if it were not his discussion with people against his idea, he would not give it up halfway. therefore, for those who tend to be obedient to others' voices, it is not wise to discuss with people who hold contrasting views, which may neither provide inspirations nor strengthen the belief. instead, it is more likely that they concentrated on their works with a simple mind, regardless of the external voices, to make progress in a down-to-earth way.
From my perspective, whether progress requires debating or not is circumstantial. To be specific, it not only depends on the individual but also on the problem itself. when the problem is encompassing, involving the profits of many sides, it is much more prudent to discuss with those with a contrasting idea, since the process will drive such benefits as discovering the potential risks and forestalling the loss in time. On the other side, if the problem is rather individual and the decision-maker is not tenacious enough, such discussions can bring a dilemma, forbidding people to insist on their dreams and reducing them to pedestrian. therefore, it is unwise to draw a hasty conclusion on whether making progress, in any situation, requires debating with people who are against you. it depends on the circumstances and situations whether such discussion will serve as obstacles or pave your way to the goal you want to achieve.
To briefly sum up, we must concede that discussing with opponents can have some benefits, but it also involves risks. we should bear in mind that whatever we want to achieve, it is always important to believe in ourselves. therefore, even those opposing ideas can serve as helpers rather than impediments on our way to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2805.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11861313869 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87955683994 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498175182482 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 845.1 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3091776061 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31959377381 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959044053505 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158433721277 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194025451339 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16273409829 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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