Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is believe that the adventure sports, which engage with dangerous activities like diving and skiing are to be banned. I think extreme sports should not ban as those kind of activities enhance the confidence of the players and need for the entertainment for bored life styles. Therefore, I completely agree with this notion.
The sports which give dreadful feelings have become more interesting for some people. The interesting party of these activities, mostly concerned on the risk they have taken on their own lives. They are pleasurable to show the others about their extreme talents and the high confidence level whereas, many cannot even believe. In addition, some of them do these sports for make money. Most of them are highly paid by the visitors. For instance, last month Sunday observer revealed an article that the player of bungee jumping, skiing or sky diving are earning more than Rs.500,000 per month in Sri Lanka.
It is apparently seen that the contemporary world today concern more on different things instead of doing the same things regularly. They are likely to have a different experience like extreme adventure activities even many have detrimental effects. However, I think the dangerous sports should do with the supervision and the instruction with a certain qualified organisation. Not only that the training institutes should give a proper training about the sports and assure the safety before the game to avoid the injuries and deads.
To conclude, I think extreme sports should have in the world and not to be banned. However, the followers should have a training and follow the safety instructions to minimize it’s drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
It is believe that the adventure sports, which engage...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... think extreme sports should not ban as those kind of activities enhance the confidence of...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The sports which give dreadful feelings have become more interesting for some pe...
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Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...the player of bungee jumping, skiing or sky diving are earning more than Rs.500,000 per mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22509225092 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67139303288 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2770020886 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218377382575 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750655138567 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555868337572 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138215112886 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460978661879 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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