Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear mr and mrs Brown,
I hope your are doing great. I am writing this letter in response to your complain letter that you sent me yesterday about the noise from my house. I am regretful for that. please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience cause to you and humbly ask for your forgiveness.
As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen. I have recently called a plumber to repair water taps because it leaks extensively. unfortunately, it is taking longer than expected. So we had to ask plumber to speed up the work by working overtime.
In your letter, you said that your daughter would have exam her final exam next week and you are concerned about the noise. please be assured that I would ask plumber not to work after 5:00 pm in the evening from today. Once again I am sorry for the trouble and assure you that I will be more careful from now on.
Yours sincerely,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esterday about the noise from my house. I am regretful for that. please accept my...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...from my house. I am regretful for that. please accept my sincere apology for the incon...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...ater taps because it leaks extensively. unfortunately, it is taking longer than expected. So ...
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Line 17, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
... and you are concerned about the noise. please be assured that I would ask plumber not...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 191, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'pm'.
Suggestion: pm
...ould ask plumber not to work after 5:00 pm in the evening from today. Once again I am sorry for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60479041916 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42119141742 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0402307871 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389041531189 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128033836224 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105579260197 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178898098407 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144003113571 0.0580467560999 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.