The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
"Today's youngsters are tomorrow's leaders". If the younger people are trained in the right way and given the right knowledge of leadership and sense of coöperation as how a leader leads a team and encourages the entire team or the society to give, then the society can always see a great difference and improvement.
It is the duty of the parents to educate their children about the societal problems and encouraging them to come up with innovative and solvable ideas to solve the issues that we faces in a day-to-day basis. For example, the environmental issues that we are facing and lack of discipline when it comes to keeping our environment clean. This discipline builds up in young people when they are trained from their childhood both by their parents and the schools they study. They have to be encouraged to teach their fellow mates about the discipline and work as a team.
When such a teamwork and discipline is taught at a very young age, they will be in a place to take up the responsibility as a leader with much coöperation than competition in any of the fields. It is always good to encourage the younger generation to explore and innovate and not comparing them to others.
On the other hand, it is always told that, "too much is too bad". It's very bad for younger people to force them to think, and not letting them think. And comparing them with others, will always get them a feeling of competition.
A good leader is one who not only leads the entire team but also walks with the team. To feed such a quality of leadership in the younger people it's the duty of the parents to show them the right path of success by letting them explore and innovate which gives them a sense of coöperation, not competition.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
...vable ideas to solve the issues that we faces in a day-to-day basis. For example, the...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work as a team. When such a teamwork and discipline is taught at a very young...
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Line 15, column 146, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ity of leadership in the younger people its the duty of the parents to show them th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 310.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70322580645 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74026704457 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48064516129 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6923076923 57.8364921388 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195741989556 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660738738063 0.0743258471296 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683162025911 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10951283638 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558162925826 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.