Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by many people that in order to maintain peaceful environment in the workplace, all the employees should be given similar salary. I completely disagree with this view and this essay will discuss the negative aspects of this viewpoint and justify my argument.
To begin with, some people are of the opinion that if all the employees in a company are paid equally, there will be no discrimination among the employees as all are being treated equally. This would promote feeling of equality and team spirit in the company as well as maintain peace and harmony amongst colleagues. However, in my opinion this trend would have negative impact on the highly qualified and exprienced employees.
People with blue collar and while collar job should not be paid same salaries. They should be paid depending on their position, qualification and exprience. Blue collar jobs does not require high qualifications, rather requires minimal qualification and labour work. Whereas, the white collar jobs require higher academic degree and fine skills. These people have put tremendous amount of time, efforts and money to get higher degrees in a hope that one day they will be in a position to get high paid jobs and a successful life. It would be very unfair to pay same salary to people with different qualifications. Take for example, a dentist and a dental nurse cannot be paid equally, though they work in the same clinic for same amount of time.
Furthermore, the concept of paying equal salary will discourage people from pursuing tertiary education due to the fact that even after so many years of efforts and investment they are not being rewarded for their calibre. Thus, this trend would have detrimental effects on the education sector.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the view of paying same salary to all the employees in a company. They should be awarded depending on their qualifications and fine skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71375864463 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517133956386 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4450151873 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130020373764 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496696765432 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673200847609 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850926394564 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500057471893 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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