Some people think that having a set retirement age( 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation , is unfair. They belive that certain workers deserve to retire and recive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Everyone dreams of having a peaceful retirement living in the later stage of their life. Many countries follow the ‘fixed-exit-age’ policy for their employees; that is, irrespective of the field/nature of job everyone retires at the age of 65 and avail pension benefits only after that.
Few people think that the above rule should not be generalized for all set of jobs, instead certain occupation holders should have an earlier retiring age and pensioned. I completely approve of this opinion, also think that the people who work for the country and spend most of their life away from family like defense people should benefit the most of this.
In the process of making rules and policies often, the higher authorities ignore the broader picture. For instance, we cannot compare the life of an investment banker with that of an army officer posted in the border security force. Hence, having a same job-exit age for both would be unfair, as the one is working for himself, sitting in a comfortable environment, while the later is far from everything he knows and owns and ensures that there is no threat to his people
I also believe that there is no way that a society can pay back to the soldiers who selflessly work for the country and for the safety of citizen. They usually stay away from families for many years and always have no guarantee of their return back to the loved ones. Thereby, bending rules and providing them earlier retirement with higher pension, to make their lives a little better can be seen as a small way to show gratitude to our real heroes.
Finally, rules are made for the benefit of the society and if tweaking the rules has a larger use and is fair, we should consider it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 238, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...s and always have no guarantee of their return back to the loved ones. Thereby, bending rul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73331106854 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6536234486 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.444444444 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240966408669 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959166815948 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693350141521 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144834078903 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415117955765 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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