Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, illegal downloading had become a challenging issue around the world. The effect of this practice has been great in the music industry. People are suggesting that pirating music has a negative effect while others disagree. From my vantage point, I aside with those who believe illegal downloading should be deteriorated. I will delineate both sides of this argument in the subsequent paragraphs.
On one hand, those who believe that illegal downloading has no impact on the music industry have their own justifications. This is because artists can earn their living by shifting into other forms of entertainment. To be more specific, they can simply use their image to appear in advertisements or to promote a significant product as a way to earn their living. In addition, producers and singers can achieve their financial goals through concerts. For example, many artists can have world tours in different locations around the world and earn a large sum of money through this event.
On the other hand, some people opine that downloading music without paying for it can have negative effects on artists and industry. To begin with, composers invest their time and energy into creating a song to hope that in return they would have a financial state. Consequently, if illegal downloading continue they will not be able to survive in this competitive market. What’s more, losing interest is one of the other outcomes of this issue which would discourage artists to go forward. Therefore, the above reasons can be named as why people are concern about free downloading.
To summarise, free downloading won’t affect the music industry because artists can use their fame in order to earn money as well as having events like concerts. However, the spread of unpaid downloading will decrease the interest of artists to pull through. From a practical standpoint, I believe not only illegal downloading is an unlawful act but also damages the industry in a serious way.
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...awful act but also damages the industry in a serious way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20123839009 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81624855628 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3302279175 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256248539009 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868260116026 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806648720618 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16561931239 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591033793675 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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