advantages and disadvantages privatized spaceflight industry
In set of material, in reading passage writer stats the several advantages of privatized spaceflight industry, it also states that it has great benefits for science and public. But in lecture professor casts doubt on it and explains how the privatized spaceflight industry not beneficial for science and public.
First, from the reading passage writer state that the privatized spaceflight industry is making spaceflight cheaper, the technological costs down very fast because it will create competition. The lowering cost is directly beneficial for space tourist and scientists. Then they will able to use private flight for their research purposes. However in the lecture professor state that the elaborations of traffic control from prevent collision is more costly and cost of testing and retesting of flight for safety purpose of space tourist is goes more high which is the reason of not lowering the price of ticket.
Additionally, the privatization in space industry, the reading says that more and more industry will be developed and the result of that is, they have required more space working scientist for discoveries made more fast that past. But in lecture professor state that the company wants to pay high scale salary for their work. The high scale salary is distracting them from their aim or target.
Finally, in passage writer state that public tax burden of space travel will be significantly eased when the government is no longer the only sponsor. The expenses of the industry will be paid by its customers. However, in fact, the private spaceflight companies cannot raise such enormous fund without the huge public tax subsidy. Tax duty, then, will certainly become more painful to the public, according to the professor.
In conclusion, there are many controversies as to the privatization of the space travel. Its benefits or disadvantages are still in arguments. While the reading proves its advantages, the lecturer asserts that it does more harm than good to both science and the public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, then, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25538461538 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7546728454 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.352325538 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235285939733 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796810479866 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084736864755 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135376990614 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811767537841 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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