People should follow the local customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Nowaday, a lot of people travel and stay in foreign country for jobs and study. Many people have an opinion that foreigners should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. Because that is necessary for them. Personally, I definitely agree with them.
Some people they have another view. They think try to learn and follow the local customs and traditions are not important or maybe it will affect to their country, because each places have different traditions. Actually, their opinions are not wrong. However, they don’t know that there are also many difficulties of don’t familiar with local traditions. First of disadvantage is the foreigners will be social isolation. They should blend to surrounding people or things, that is one of the norms of social behavior. Secondly, if the integration don’t follow the rules of the host country, they must have some pitfalls. They bound to fall foul of the law. Furthermore, for business, there will be many difficulties for them to facing, for example, hard to start up a company, can’t communicate with any partners. They must be aware of the business practices.
The benefits of following the local customs and traditions are the reason I agree with it. Firstly, the residents will be welcome in the host country. The local people will think they are really friendly and nice. After that, they can easily make foreign friends which is a really good thing, especially for entrepreneurs. More than that, they can mutual understanding, they can share with each others customs and traditions. Secondly, newcomers will enjoy the traditions and be able to take part in community life. Therefore, the immigrants allow to enjoy the host country’s festivals. Furthermore, following the local customs and traditions are suitable time for the people who start living in a new country to gain more knowledge.
According from those benefits above, I highly suggest that new immigrants should follow the local customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. That is essential for them to not get into trouble. However, you can not forget your originally country traditions.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: enjoying
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16853932584 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77505344107 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47191011236 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9580743123 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.24 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326185554937 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955935794795 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13376489334 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266158154624 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931374421808 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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