You won in a competition organized by the newspaper but you have not received it yet. Write a letter to the editor
Describe the competition
Describe the prize you are going to get
What do you want editor to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the prize I won last month and have not received it yet.
This was a local competition in which all residents of Bristol were encouraged to participate and write an article on the causes of air contamination. Also, participants had to suggest some viable solutions to curtail this problem.
As I won the first prize, I was entitled to get £ 5000 as a gift. Regretfully, I did not receive it and I have been waiting since the time it was announced, even though I had provided all the details regarding my account title and bank account number immediately. I am speculating either it has been sent to the wrong address or not granted at all.
I would like you to ask your relevant department regarding thus and inform me that when I will be able to receive the reward of attaining first position for write-up.
I look forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hanna Marin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the prize ...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£5000'.
Suggestion: £5000
... the first prize, I was entitled to get £ 5000 as a gift. Regretfully, I did not recei...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ning first position for write-up. I look forward to hearing soon from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74293051324 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8174784587 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173990182529 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624730058105 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604257446881 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106108002321 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582185009476 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.