Do you agree or disagree with this statement? The world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In the modern era, the world experiences a lot of different changes that make nowadays different from the past. In this mean, some people suppose that being in these days is less enjoyable or less satisfying, while others feel that living in this situation is fascinating. In my opinion, modern society has more enjoys and more feelings of happiness than in the past. I think in this way for two specific reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, the most important reason that I feel in this way lies in the belief that the key factor of modern society is complete communication between people all over the world. It is crucial for people to be able to have access to their family or their close friends. Human beings can use transportation such as faster vehicles like airplanes, cars, and motorcycles or have a virtual conversation without going anyplace, just by clicking on some keys in their computers or smartphones. For example, one of my brothers is a Ph.D. student at MIT in the USA. We live in Africa and he is unreachable for us. Consequently, each Sunday, my mother talks with him by a video call in the Whatsapp and this is very pleasant for her.
Moreover, another important reason that I think being in this era is beneficial than the past is related to existing of more academic places like universities. In the past, a person should learn from his father or ancestor a career and works on that field without knowing anything about a variety of subjects that existed in the world. In contrast, in today's world, a child goes to a school and understands he prefers the field. After going to university, he becomes a scientist or a specialist in his major. He never could find such jobs if he lived in the past. For example, my grandfather was a farmer in our village. He never realized city conditions and opportunities. One day, my father decided to live in a big city to improve his children's mentality and personality. In fact, he sacrificed his life to give us a better chance to be a doctor or engineer. Now, all of my brothers and sisters are good and creative persons for our city.
In summary, taking account of all these factors help us to reach the conclusion that living in nowadays the world is more intriguing and more satisfying than the past. Having better access to favorite people with new technologies and the ability to go to a university to be an educated person and changing your ancestor living method are two reasons that I think make nowadays happier and enjoyable than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iving in this situation is fascinating. In my opinion, modern society has more enj...
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Line 11, column 93, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... us to reach the conclusion that living in nowadays the world is more intriguing and more s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i feel, i think, in contrast, in fact, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67405764967 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69425327191 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525498891353 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.717909196 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8181818182 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242182677676 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600652004007 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571296995665 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15714561593 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549563364405 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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