The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The presented line graph demonstrates data about how many books read by people, divided by gender, at Burnaby Public Library over the period of four years, starting from 2011 to 2014.

The most striking feature to be observed is that, whilst women attendees accounted for the highest number of reading books at the beginning of period, it was replaced by men readers towards the end of survey.

Looking at the data in more detail, it is evident that in 2011, the amount of books read by females was about 5000 and this was 3000 greater than that of males. Just one year after, the gap between the numbers of books read by two sexes had widened significantly. By 2012, the number of books read by females rose dramatically to 8,000, whereas that of books read by males saw only a small increase to 4,000.

From 2012 and 2013, the figures for both genders rose to the same point of almost 10,000 books and then figure for male continued to increase with surpassing that those for females in the same year. At the final year period, while books number in case of reading by men steadily rose to hit the peak of about 140000, the latter experienced substantial decrease to the around 8000 which was the same amount with 2012.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66210045662 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2551715851 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6769295512 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.857142857 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355481499692 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161617463688 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893124648945 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218800139632 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867096690857 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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