A nation should require all of its students to study same curriculum until they enter college
A nation is made up of small villages, metropolitan cities. Every village and eventually every state has its own background like history and speciality and drawbacks.
According to me there should be same curriculum for all the students until they enter college. Having said that, there should be some extra subjects like history or speciality like arts of their own state which will differ state wise in order to gain knowledge that is identical to state. Other subjects like Maths, Science, Computers etc should be same for each and every students. This will help to create same platform for all as they all will have same background and this provides justice to all.
If the curriculum is not same then there would be injustice. for an example, a bright student from some state which is not fully developed has different syllabus than some average student from metropolitan state. Eventhough working hard and having bright mind, that student will lack some knowledge just because he was not provided syllabus. On the contrary, if syllabus is the same for all then we can have comparision and various other activities like science fair or like elocution competition or like presentation and seminars. By this we can create same platform for all irrespective of their financial status .
But there should be one subject which would be different, which will portray art related to their state/village. For an example, Gujarat is famous for its kachhchhi work so students from gujarat should be aware of that. In addition to that they should be aware of the background of their states like what are the advantages and disadvantages, what are the areas where they need to grow etc in order develop those.
So it can be concluded that there should be similar curriculum for all the students of nation, but some extra subjects related to history and art of their own state should be added.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59900509579 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8833549944 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253279331308 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106759503331 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102910668988 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150737610151 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680285380807 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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