some people feel that boarding schools are an exellent option for children , while other people disagree for a number of reasons.
consider both sides od this debate and reach a conclusion
one of the most controversial issues among parent and young people is boarding schools . althogh some parent prefer to send their children to the bording schools , the other group disagree whith this issue.
this essay will discuss the debate and give a conclusion view.
on the one hand some parent have believed that this is a period of transition for teenagers and there are many crucial mileston and also they have opportunities to learnd diffrent skills in a group of their peers thus being in situation like that makes children become more independed person and it so usefull for their future to manage their life. in addition when they are far from their family 'supporte they become more confident on themselves .
by contrast ,opponents of this view point out that living far from parent can effect adolescenes emotionaly and also phisicaly.
examples can be seen that most of the peole at this age are not responsible enough to manage their personal routine life. finally it seem that not all adolescense have this ability to live alone.
overall it seem advisable that choosing to live in aboarding schools or not ,directly depends on the personality of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07653061224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51960821256 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5611492311 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171034683811 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701651852742 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574193499651 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831752495486 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667066265342 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.