Developed countries should take more refugees from poorest countries. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that advanced nations should invite myriad displaced people from developing countries because of the number of reasons. This essays agrees that developed states should accept needy people from undeveloped countries. Firstly, the essay will discuss a moral obligation of rich nations and secondly, discuss how they can afford to those in need.
Firstly, developed states are responsible for many of the problems affecting the developing countries. For instance, America has been at war with many countries in Asia and Middle East. These wars destroyed the houses and livelihood of hundreds of thousands of people. A genuine example of this is Afghanistan. More than a decade ago, it was the battlefield of America and Russia. As a result of this, today Afghanistan is one of the poorest countries in the globe. Since the advanced nations are responsible for initiating many conflicts, they have a moral duty to take care of displaced people.
Secondly, most of the developed countries have stable economics and upgraded infrastructure that can accommodate many more people. Canada could be a prime example, where they have less population and more facilities to sustain, and less crime rate comparing to other states. They can comfortably accept any figure of needy people and refugees. Moreover, refugees are not known to create any problems in their adoptive countries because they are well aware of challenging time in their own countries. By accepting refugees, the crime rate could be curtailed progressively which would make the world a more peaceful place to live in.
In conclusion, the entire world has responsibilities to rehabilitate the displaced people because of good precedent set by Canada and the fact that by accepting refugees with the arrangement of jobs would alleviate the crime rate globally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'agree'.
Suggestion: agree
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86677451124 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9478430378 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233664865527 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711908398811 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714923086063 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123604903203 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627099976367 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.