Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have status of role models, in particular for younger people
Nowadays, in our thriving world the pace of our life at the rapid stage, day by day the number of famous peoples are increasing because of development in the world. They become popular in a diverse sphere such as science, art, technology, etc. Most of them are good, and some of them are bad. They gain popularity because of young generations that are always resembling their lifestyle, fashion and sometimes behave similarly and pursue on various social websites. I believe that there is no contradictory effect of it, but they should keep the distance and try to be as themselves.
First of all, the famous peoples are equivalent. There are similar to, working-class peoples but they are popular-priced. Predominantly, it does not inform, that simple citizen should imitate them and be their bipartisan. If prominence commits a heroic deed, it may be an underlying reason for copying not other actions, such as smoking cigarettes. Explicitly, it affects in a wrong way that makes youngsters more discourteous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an. If prominence commits a heroic deed, it may be an underlying reason for copyi...
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...ng reason for copying not other actions, such as smoking cigarettes. Explicitly, ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...king cigarettes. Explicitly, it affects in a wrong way that makes youngsters more discourteous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, similarly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1265060241 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00766548615 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680722891566 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6774519375 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796662025782 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271748390787 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362691834924 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613593590617 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00683847833904 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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