The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners.
Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
Write at least 150 words.
The graphs illustrate the nutrition table of macaroni and medium baked potato as dinner meals.
From a simple recognition to the provided information, it is apparent that highest compound of both meals is carbohydrates. however, medium baked potato involves a higher protein in comparison by macaroni.
It is evident that both meals carbohydrates is more than the other components. 35% of baked potato is contained carbohydrates, furthermore, macaroni mainly consists of large amounts of carbohydrate approximately 52 percent. There are a significant different is protein amount that baked potato has 25% protein, though, macaroni’s protein is just 11 percent.
It is considerable that saturated fat in macaroni is 21 percent, however, baked potato consists merely 10 percent saturated fat. Besides that, the amount of glucose in medium baked potato is just 15 percent but the amount of same compound in macaroni is 11 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ompound of both meals is carbohydrates. however, medium baked potato involves a higher ...
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... are a significant different is protein amount that baked potato has 25% protein, thou...
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...ompound in macaroni is 11 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17733947055 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.919558082 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0287419667321 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.01659438756 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258024132551 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270646575286 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297087971914 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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