Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? : Students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies.
In civilized societies, time efficiency has been one of the most crucial issues in human beings’ lives. Beyond any doubt, this concern is even more monumental for students since they are getting prepared for the real life, the need for carrying out activities with most benefits and advantages is inevitable. An unavoidable question which always has been the topic of controversy and has brought about heated debates is whether side works such as organization and club activities can generate as many benefits for students as the academic studies can. Both adherents and opponents provide substantial reasons for the option they support. From my vantage point, for students, organization and club activities are as beneficial as academic studies. Although some might find this controversial, in what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective.
First of all, it is significant to be mentioned that some skills important for the future success and prosperity are not taught in academic context. It is unquestionable that learning such other skills as organizational discipline, leadership, and so on are as important as academic skills, and they will dramatically improve students’ chance for a flourishing career path. Although the silver lining is to acquire good grades and graduating with an impressive academic resume, concentrating only on academic studies will be deficient for future prosperity; and this is for extremely momentous importance of other skills which I alluded to.
Moreover, practical experiences play a monumental role in success in the real world. Those experiences cannot be achieved in books and academic studies; and we are all aware how crucial they are. According to a survey conducted in my country, Iran, back in 2013, 75 percent of people who had jobs in thriving and prosperous businesses admitted that they had participated in organization activities during their educations. A balance between academic studies and other beneficial activities will provide students with an outstanding opportunity to earn invaluable experiences as well as success in studies.
The last but not least is that in this modern world being in high spirit is considerably difficult than any other time. Stresses related to academic responsibilities, multi-tasking, and so on, all in all have brought about a person to be susceptible to many mental diseases. Under this situation, club activities will relieve the pressure and stress. To exemplify, take my personal experience as a real case. In the third year of my education at university, I encountered an unbearable pressure in my studies and term papers. These led me to a drastic/acute depression. Following my GP’s prescription to have some club activities once or twice a week, I not only recovered, but also acquired better grades in my course.
To wrap up, contrary beliefs might be tossed around about whether organization and club activities can generate as many benefits for students as the academic studies can. I personally believe that pressures and stresses in the modern world, and besides/as well as the trend away from relying only on academic degrees toward practical skills have brought about a necessary need for students to participate in activities aside from academic studies. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons and examples that can be invoked to back up my perspective, but let’s suffice to this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, third, well, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2892.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35555555556 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09748504117 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507407407407 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 925.2 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4388703042 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.739130435 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4782608696 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273491917159 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737238680048 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800921866642 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160307966571 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916184425338 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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