You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop.You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund.However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy.Write a letter to the store manager, explaining the problems you have had.Ask for a refund or exchange on the item.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am your regular customer who always buys from the main branch of your store on Knowledge Street. And I am writing a letter asking you to solve a problem.
A few days ago I bought a few pieces of clothing such as socks, blouses, shoes and jackets from this branch.It was exactly Sunday, and the store was full of buyers. When I got to the cashier, the cashier put a different colored blouse on my belongings.And I realized when I got home. And when I went to the store, your assistant refused to change it.
Your stores are known as customer-oriented, and I think that is not right for your store.Given that the problem was due to the carelessness of the cashier, I urge you to replace the jumper or return the money to me.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: And
...fferent colored blouse on my belongings.And I realized when I got home. And when I ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Given
... think that is not right for your store.Given that the problem was due to the careles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57792207792 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71451095816 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9194824036 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237172003618 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106608695089 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608107926829 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148119881501 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334907791982 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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