Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view.
Few people opine that the government is squandering money on arts which can be utilised for the betterment of the society. However, others believe that it is worth to spend. I disagree to a large extent that the authority is wasting money on artwork . In the following essay I shall discuss the same.
To begin with, art is an important part of every country. Firstly, arts display creativity and imagination skills of the people. It defines culture and history of the nation. It also helps to recall past time. To elaborate, in India sahyadri caves are popular in maharastra state for its speechles sculptures and paintings of Bodhisattvas. Secondly, art skills aid in boosting economical development of the country. Many tourist visit the places to have look on spectacular creativity of the people which helps in generating revenue and employment opportunities in the society. For instance, Taj mahal is a mosuleum which is one of the seven wonders in the world that attracts many visitors which enables to create many work opportunities among the people.
However, instead of investing money in preserving art skills, this can be utilised for the benefit of the people. Government can utilise the fund for the better infrastructure facilities, medical facilities and other social work. Furthermore, an authority can spend money for better educational and sport activities. For example, developing country like India should invest money to develop rural areas and satisfy their basic needs.
To conclude, although there are many other factors which are need primary attention, art culture can not be neglected. It has many advantages. It helps to display culture, creativity and imagination of the people. It should be preserved to maintain uniqueness of the nationinfrastucture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32746478873 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00689676107 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0498477464 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.65 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191684332911 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541772386976 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06809784432 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126382117988 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776648816623 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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