The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The Pie Charts illustrate the population of different age groups in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions of 2050.
Overall,it can be seen that according of projection,Yemen 0 to 14 years age group population will decrease in 2050.Whereas,other 2 age groups will rise in 2050. Italy 0 to 14 years and 15 to 59 years age groups population will decrease,and 60 + years age group population will decrease.
Looking and graph in more detail, it is evident that the proportion of 60 + years group which population from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% in 2050.Similarly,population of 15 to 59 years group will increase to 57.3 % at Yemin in 2050. 0 to 14 years population will reduce from 50. 1% in 2000 to 37.0 % in 2050.
Turning to the remaining data sets,it is clearly seen that the proportion of 60 + years group which will citizens rise from 24.1% in 2000 to 42.3 % in 2050.While,population of 15 to 59 years group will goes down from 61.6 % in 2000 to 46.2 % in 2050.Similarly, 0 to 14 years group population will decline from 14.3% in 2000 to 11.5% in 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71891891892 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44106991697 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421621621622 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.7435487147 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252601746893 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18643903377 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103514861891 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231794892796 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107117964721 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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