you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this
arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
- describe the situation
- explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
- say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am in worst situation due to my roommate. I have completely frustrated from my housemate bad habits and behavior and I hope
you could be favorable for me.
Let me explain my situation. Room in which I am living is fantastic from all prespective, however habits of my housemate is nussace for me past two months. If, I
go in details, then, firstly, his smoking hanits always make me uncomfortable. As a result, It does not sute to my body system and i feel vomitting. While, I study that time
time he is used to listen loulder music as well as sing very loudly too, In such ambiance I hardly concentrate on my studies. Last but not least, he stays awake almost
all night and watch movies with turning on light. As such, I never sleep in night properly.
Would you kindly shift me or him into other where I can find the mental peace. If, I share room with another person then it is ok as lond as he is quite and cooprative.
Here, I am so greatfull, If you provide me balcony room, where I can breathe natural air in the mornings.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Hitesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
... I am writing to let you know that I am in worst situation due to my roommate. I have co...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...te bad habits and behavior and I hope you could be favorable for me. Let me ...
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Line 11, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mate is nussace for me past two months. If, I go in details, then, firstly, his...
^^
Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is nussace for me past two months. If, I go in details, then, firstly, his smokin...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Go
...ussace for me past two months. If, I go in details, then, firstly, his smoking ...
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Line 13, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... It does not sute to my body system and i feel vomitting. While, I study that tim...
^
Line 13, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to my body system and i feel vomitting. While, I study that time time he is used to...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...l vomitting. While, I study that time time he is used to listen loulder music as w...
^^^^
Line 15, column 12, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to listening'.
Suggestion: used to listening
.... While, I study that time time he is used to listen loulder music as well as sing very loud...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast but not least, he stays awake almost all night and watch movies with turning ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...but not least, he stays awake almost all night and watch movies with turning on ...
^^^
Line 27, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully, Hitesh
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, while, i feel, you know, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53488372093 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58524330843 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0781220953 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165518039664 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531914911915 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442041619287 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756266568909 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521555093917 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.