The means of communicating in society today has changed markedly over the last ten years. In your opinion, what are the positive and negative impacts of this change?
As the development of technology increases drastically, it has brought a significant difference to our modern lives, for example, the ways of communicating have increased over the past decade, apart from face to face interactions, there has also been a variety of communicating ways to choose from since they're either a phone call away, or if preferred typing a message, or logging into your account to face time them, which means that distance is no longer an obstacle in communicating while forming a relationship with others. However, with this change, it has brought positive and also negative impacts, which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.
From my point of view, one of the biggest advantages of the way communication has varied is the shortening of the distance. For instance, getting ahold of another person has proven to be quite challenging, as there are multiple obstacles standing in their way, however, thanks to the development, it is no longer a problem, thus can be very convenient for business conferences in need of different professionalists, and also people can form bonds with foreigners as well.
On the other hand, because more people spending time scrolling on their phones, often resulting in a lack of real-life interaction. As people find communicating via social media comes in handier and faster than being present at a gathering, it's obvious that they'd prefer the first option, which could lead to less interpersonal interactions and intimacy, even worse higher rates of illiteracy as people use emotion stickers instead of writing a message.
In conclusion, with how communication has altered, it has brought on both positive and negative effects, thus we should be more concerned and know how to balance when using.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23859649123 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06150354233 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.84699964 50.4703680194 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.285714286 104.977214359 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.7142857143 20.9669160288 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1428571429 7.25397266985 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964635253167 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445569134482 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385598561028 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555214028896 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431483194132 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 12.6369458128 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.94827586207 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.5123152709 285% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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