Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued by some that dwelling in another country which their language is unknown can make exorbitant problems. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state some reasons to support my view.
The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that people who stay in a foreign country may confirm difficulties to connect other parts of society. This is because of that the majority of the population use to become closed each other and make a sense of empathy by talking in a same language. So, language barriers can make immigrants separated and isolated from natives and it may lead them to feel homesick and depressed. In this circumstances efficiency of people is decreased and a wide variety of bad effects are considerable.
Another reason for my opinion is that it is hard for foreign speakers to meet their needs. They would be limited by lack of community. For example, finding addresses without any map and buying requirements from shopping centers are some troubles which can mentioned.
Lastly, being unfamiliar can cause major problems to find an appropriate job and continue education. Having an occupation and becoming educated are significant aspect for every nation. So, immigrants whom they cannot achieve them, would make some problems. As the aggregate of jobless and illiterate people are increased, society will be forced serious problems. Moreover, although they do all their efforts to be successful, they cannot fulfill their wishes and it can make some individual problems.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion that being in a place with a foreign language can bring some difficulties. It is recommended all immigrants to learn their second language as well as their original.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... of that the majority of the population use to become closed each other and make a ...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'circumstances'' or 'circumstance's'?
Suggestion: circumstances'; circumstance's
...to feel homesick and depressed. In this circumstances efficiency of people is decreased and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, may, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11149825784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78622359496 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0484374565 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192321309151 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619428185184 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04493054832 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113567451751 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553474234906 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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