In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.
A further more subtle point is that children learn how to spend their money which is extremely important for them in their adult life. Students who come to the dormitory, are alone and away from their parents. They have to manage the money that their parent gave to them, to the end of the mouth. It will be a good practice for them how to save and expend their money which is useful for them in the future. Also, based on their amount of money, they have to make a wise plan for their cost. For instance, a person who has not a lot of money should think about his purchases. Therefore, he will learn how to divide his money for his purchasing.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are copious advantages for children to learn how to spend their money, to become more responsible in their future life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 1977.66487455 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44516129032 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29641171478 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 212.727598566 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8611309666 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240116284797 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116332358412 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584160686595 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21320828056 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177578073035 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.