Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
nowadays, which is the critical issue that environment face is in debate. Some believe losing specific plants and animals is the main issue that environment face while others highlight there are more pressing issues than that. This essay will discuss the both perspectives and what are more important issues than plants and animals.
On one hand, it is true that plants and animals play a big role in nature. as an example, trees help to maintain environment oxygen and CO2 levels while maintaining ozone layer around the globe to prevent suns microwaves from entering our atmosphere. Furthermore, pollination by animals help the plants to develop in more areas. For example, in developed countries people plant trees more to support their forests and as a solution to the air pollution. Moreover, people make bee farms to help to grow their crops as they help significantly in the pollination process.
On the other hand, I believe industrialization and deforestation are more serious issues that have critical consequences against environment. As an example, in most developing countries when they increasingly entering to the industrialization, deforestation is inevitable and environment pollution will be the secondary outcome. Polluted water and toxic gases will cause death of animals and plants.
In conclusion, it is true that loss of plants and animals effect our environment badly, however in my opinion deforestation and environment pollution by industrialization should be on top of the triangle. Because it will be the root cause for the loss of animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.392 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15676036468 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9537972238 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156686613368 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057288151549 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531086700575 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091233293603 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345656948912 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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