A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The speaker asserts that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, insofar i agree with the speaker that the nation should do that if it wants to prosper in the long run.
Firstly, by imposing the same national curriculum, it is sure that every student has to read the same books, the same subjects carefully developed by the scholar of the nation. As an example the curriculum may include English, Maths, Social Studies, Physics, Chemistry and Biology subject. This subjects are the basics of any education system. If a student all that subject in the school they must build a solid basic knowledge for their later period in college. Because in college the higher education subjects are derivatives from this basic subjects. So, if they understand this basics very well they could do well in the college too. Students have better grasp and understanding for later study.
Secondly, by reading subject like Math, physics, chemistry etc will help a student to understand in which subject they want to study more. If someone like Physics in the school, she can choose quantum physics, astro physics or choose other subject which is root in physics. For instance, I liked biology a lot in my school, Then I decided that i would study in biology related subject in my college. Indeed i ended up studying Veterinary and animal science in my college.
However, maintaining the same national curriculum has a great risk too. Moreover, it can damage certain ethnic culture, linguistics of the country. Every states has its own culture, own value, some states has different language too. By imposing a homogenous curriculum can risk this diversity insofar.
But every good things has its bad side , so in my opinion studying under same curriculam would be helpfull for all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t subject in the school they must build a solid basic knowledge for their later period in college. Beca...
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...edge for their later period in college. Because in college the higher education subject...
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...e derivatives from this basic subjects. So, if they understand this basics very well t...
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... basic subjects. So, if they understand this basics very well they could do well in ...
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...a lot in my school, Then I decided that i would study in biology related subject ...
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... biology related subject in my college. Indeed i ended up studying Veterinary and anim...
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...y related subject in my college. Indeed i ended up studying Veterinary and animal...
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...ic culture, linguistics of the country. Every states has its own culture, own value, ...
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...inguistics of the country. Every states has its own culture, own value, some states...
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... But every good things has its bad side , so in my opinion studying under same cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52877478021 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4935259092 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404185207653 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109226544683 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14887031702 0.0758088955206 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235333951599 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197052363326 0.0667264976115 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.