The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In 1888 was seen, for the first time, a car on the British roads. Later on, on 2000 the number of cars circulating on British roads was close to 29 millions. Nowadays there are many other forms of transport, which should be encouraged to use and global rules can be establishing, regarding the possession of cars and utilise.
Other ways of transfer, in modern days are availables and we should take them in consideration. I strongly believe that,taking the bus to work, or another places, can be healthful for the environment and there will be no congestion on the roads. Commuting can make people socialise too. For example, I meet my best friend in a bus going to work. Another form of movement are the bicycles, which gives us the possibility to be close to mother nature and admire her beauty.
Set some worldwide regulation to control the usage and the care ownership is something that cannot be accepted, and I disagree with. There are times when you can not rely on having to wait for the bus because you will be late, also cannot take the bike due to the weather. Therefore, having your own car can save you.
Overall, there are many other forms of transport the we should consider, depending on the time we have. However restricting the usage and the access to buy a car is not something to contemplate. After all we are living in a democratic era.
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- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use To what ex 56
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... a car is not something to contemplate. After all we are living in a democratic era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, regarding, so, therefore, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64745019436 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.533936399 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3571428571 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285773128524 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870769345103 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837328355131 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171879739523 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141346247583 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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